Well...that was different
Yeah, it wasn't really flash. But that doesn't stop it from being good, right? I'm sure there are a lot of things you know you need to improve on, like the lack of sound (sound=excitement!), That trial thingy that was in the way, and...maybe the lengthy intro. The intro was about half of the flash, maybe find a way to cut it down a bit? Other than that, the actual movie was really smooth and well choreographed and put together. It was short, but I'm sure the next one you do will be much better!